I found this excellent post on horses on Dan Koboldt’s blog. It is part of his weekly Science in Sci-fi, Fact in Fantasy blog series, where he tackles one of the scientific or technological concepts pervasive in sci-fi (space travel, genetic engineering, artificial intelligence, etc.) with input from an expert. Be sure to join his mailing list to be notified every time new content is posted.
His post on horses was actually a guest post, written by Rachel Annelise Chaney; a woman who spent her childhood inhaling every scrap of horse information she could find and riding every equine she could climb on. Since adopting an ex-racehorse, she’s ridden, trained or cared for everything from Thoroughbreds to Quarter Horses, Drafts to Arabians, Warmblood jumpers to Paint barrel racers. A reader and writer of SFF, Rachel currently languishes in the Eternal Pit of Revision. You should follow her on Twitter. Send coffee. Ignore frustrated screams.
As, for some reason, I was unable to reblog, I opted for including here a summary of Rachel’s post. You can read the full post on Dan’s blog.
Casting Horses in Fictional Worlds
Matching your mount to your world and/or character can be a tricky business and Hollywood will steer you wrong every time. Using the wrong horse may seem like a little thing, but it will rip horse-knowledgeable readers right out of your story. Three key issues to consider when writing your fantasy-land horses are:
- The horse’s use of purpose
- The climate the horse lives in
- Your character’s horse experience
Let’s take them one-by-one below.
1. A Horse’s Use Of Purpose
Contrary to popular belief, horses are not all-purpose. Like dogs, humans developed horse breeds over centuries of selective mating. Each breed was created for a specific purpose. So, the first thing you should do is pinpoint your horse’s purpose. Are they a knight’s mount? An over-rough-terrain horse to take your character on a trek? A nobleman’s hunter or a cavalry steed?
Each purpose takes a different kind of horse.
A Knight’s Horse: The Irish Draught
So you’re writing a Medieval Fantasy and have armored warriors that need to charge into battle. You might be thinking they need a big horse, tough and muscled. Something like the Budweiser Clydesdales, perhaps?
Sorry, but no. Contrary to popular belief, most armored knights did not use giant, heavy draft horses. Based on recovered equine armor and illustrations, knights’ mounts (known as chargers or destriers) tended to be short-to-average height at 14-16hh, tall and stocky.
Reason: If unhorsed, an armored warrior needed to be able to leap back on his mount. Those 18hh drafts? Not happening! A 15hh horse? Absolutely!
The smaller, stocky build is also better for sharp turns, kicks, rears, and charges in the heat of battle. Most draft horses are known as Gentle Giants. The fire needed for battle? Not their thing.
The closest modern equivalent to the medieval charger: the Irish Draught (pictured).
Horses for Long Treks: Mongol or Egyptian Arabian
The most common mistake in books, movies, and TV shows is the use of fine-boned horses on long treks, frequently Thoroughbreds. When most people think of horses, the thoroughbred tends to be the default view of how they look, move and act. Thoroughbreds are great. They have lots of heart, so they would go on that long trek over the mountains and through the woods if asked. But they would drop weight, probably get injured or dehydrated, and definitely suffer from fatigue.
If your character is going on a long trip, give them a sturdy mount, like the hardy Mongol horse. Or Napoleon’s small but intrepid Marengo, an Egyptian Arabian, who carried the French dictator through the Alps. The smaller horses may not be able to whisk your character away from danger or magnificently rear, but they’d laugh in the face of exhaustion or hazardous conditions.
Hunting/Cavalry Horses: Thoroughbreds and Warmbloods
Both hunting horses and post-Medieval cavalry horses shared similar job descriptions and necessary skills. For hunting, a horse needed to be energetic enough to leap obstacles, fast enough to keep up with prey, and cool-headed enough to listen to its rider.
After the rise of gunpowder weapons and the fall of armor, the physical conformation of cavalry horses shifted. Instead of short, stocky chargers, cavalry mounts got taller and leaner. They had to be fiery enough to charge into the fray, nimble enough to get their riders out of lethal situations, yet calm enough to obey commands immediately.
The closest modern equivalents to these horses are Thoroughbreds and Warmbloods – the same breeds that compete in the equestrian sports that evolved from cavalry training.
If you’re writing a nobleman’s hunter (from any era) or a for-pleasure mount or a Flintlock Fantasy, stick to thoroughbreds and warmbloods. They’re tall (15.2-18hh), muscular, fast and agile.
However, be sure to take into account the owner’s financial situation. If you find yourself describing your character’s horse as big and black with a flowing mane and tail and feathered feet, stop! Warmbloods like Friesians are extremely costly. Always have been. They’re amazing animals, but they are NOT cart, commoner, or insane asylum carriage horses. Looking at you, Beauty and the Beast (2017).
The Bottom Line on Horse Use
- Does your horse have a specific use? Keep descriptions in line with the breeds intended for that.
- Do not give your commoner a Friesian. Don’t give anyone a Friesian unless they’re A) rich B) need a Warmblood.
2. Matching Horse to Climate
Misconception: Horses are hardy and can weather harsh climates.
Reality: Horses are both surprisingly tough and exceptionally fragile. If your world features harsh or unusual climates, match your horses to that world.
Horses for Hot and Dry Climates
Are your characters moving through a desert, rocky wasteland, or otherwise hot and arid world? Don’t pull a Game of Thrones and put heavy horses in there. You wouldn’t stick a Siberian husky in the desert, would you?
Big, muscly horses need lots, lots, LOTS of water, food and forage to maintain that size. In reality, those Friesians the Dothraki ride across wastelands would likely die of dehydration and heat exhaustion.
If you’re writing a desert world, go for a breed that snorts in the face of extreme heat and lack of vegetation – like Arabians, Akhal-Tekes, or Marwaris. Like these breeds, your mount should be lean, compact, and light on their feet. On the shorter side (14-16hh), the desert breeds are masters of endurance. Need to go a couple thousand miles? They’ve got you covered!
Horses for Cold and Snowy Climates
These smaller, leaner equines can take you for longer distances, with less food, than a heavy mount.
On the flip side, don’t put that Arabian in a wintry climate! You wouldn’t put a Husky in the Sahara, so don’t put a greyhound on the Alaskan sled team.
Most horses can weather cold temperatures with blanketing and care by their owners. But if your setting features below zero temps, snowstorms, or persistent wintry conditions, you may need to consider going with a horse breed designed to live in freezing climates.
Cold weather horses tend to be heavier than the average riding horse and grow out a thick, fuzzy coat in the winter. While a big draft horse fits the bill, smaller breeds like the Icelandic Horse or the Fjord are great examples of a horse designed for cold winters and mountainous terrain.
If your setting is mountainous, icy or subject to freezing temps, the best match for your world is a horse with strong hooves, thick muscles, and super fuzzy winter coat. How tall or short they should be depends on their purpose.
The Bottom Line on Climate
If you have an unusual setting or climate, pick a breed that matches. If your setting doesn’t have extreme weather or unique terrain conditions, refer to the prior section on matching your mount to its purpose. Nearly all breeds can survive just fine anywhere that doesn’t have extreme hot or cold.
3. Matching Horse to Character
Misconception: Horses are living bicycles. If you learned how to ride, you can ride any horse.
Reality: Every horse has a will, emotions, personalities, and quirks. They think, feel, act and react.
Matching your specific character to a complementary horse is a case-by-case issue, and not necessarily important unless horses are a vital part of your narrative. There are, however, a couple of big issues you should avoid.
About Stallions
If your character is not an experienced rider, do NOT put them on a stallion! Don’t put anyone on a stallion without a solid reason.
As much as Hollywood likes Friesians, books and movies like stallions even more. Most stallions are temperamental, aggressive, and dangerous. Calm, attentive stallions do exist, but they’re the exception to the rule. When in doubt, go with a gelding or mare.
Horse Temperament
On the same note, don’t give your character a cool, spirited horse if they’re a nervous or excitable type. Horses are incredibly perceptive, and however a rider is feeling translates through their body and language and down the reins to the horse.
Is your character a confident, skilled rider? Sure, throw them on that fiery steed! Otherwise, I wouldn’t recommend it.
For more examples, be sure to read the full post on Dan’s blog.
All images, via Dan’s blog.
Reblogged this on Legends of Windemere.
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Ah, horses. A major need in fantasy stories. i prefer griffins. Less likely to ignore me and wander into a forest regardless of my screaming and kicking. 😁
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I see you’re a master rider like me.
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Only if it’s connected to a carousel. 😛
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I was always fascinated by horses in the fantasy genre. EVERY horse has a name. 😀 Just one of the fun quirks in fantasy. Seriously though, those are important points, Nicholas. Hugs.
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Lol – thank you, Teagan 😀
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Reblogged this on Chris The Story Reading Ape's Blog.
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Great, thanks!
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Thank you 🙂
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Reblogged this on s a gibson.
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This author/former equestrian athlete thanks you from the bottom of her heart.
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High praise considering the source 🙂
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I have horses in my Wolves of Vimar series. I have one rider ride a stallion, but she is experienced and an excellent rider and just about the only one who can manage him. When having to cross a high mountain range, they leave their horses behind.
To cross the mountains, they buy a sturdy horse, used to mountain passes and the cold.
I am glad to see I’m not too wrong in what I have done, but your post will be extremely useful in the future. I’m going to archive it for reference when I need it.
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Thanks, I’m so glad you found it useful (even though it looks like you’re doing fine anyway) 🙂
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Great post, Nicholas. Thanks for sharing. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thank you. Suzanne! I’m glad you found it useful 🙂
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Thanks, this post really helped! I happened to come across this by accident, and I am also writing a book right now- coincidently where I was going to add a horse
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Yay! I love it when that happens 😀
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You know what, me too!
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Great post, so pleasing to see knowledgeable practical advice on horses – I despair of so much ignorance displayed, especially in films and on TV with the choices of totally unsuitable horses. Plus the current fashion for Friesians. Dramatic horses, yes, but not suitable for every situation, and not what the Musketeers would have ridden at all!
Yes, I have my main character riding a Friesian, as depicted on my book cover, but she is a suitable horse for the setting, and as a current professional rider (as well as author), I’m fully qualified on this subject.
Off now, to read the original post 😀
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Wow, high praise indeed coming from someone as experienced as you! Thank you 🙂
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Reblogged this on deborahjay and commented:
Just came across th8is great reblog from Nicholas which addressed some of my favourite gripes with authors and film makers who don’t know what they are doing when they cast horses, so thought I’d share it too.
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Hello all, this is Rachel Annelise Chaney, author of the post. I am thrilled to see that it has been helpful to people!
I just wanted to let anyone know who might be interested that I have a couple of other horse posts on Dan’s blog – one on Horse Health & Injuries and one on 8 Common Horse Mistakes. If anyone thinks those might be helpful, check them out!
I’m also always happy to help with any horse questions. If anyone has a question regarding any of my horse articles, please leave a comment beneath the post on Dan’s blog, and I’ll respond as soon as I can.
Thank you so much for sharing my article, Nicholas! I hope this helps as many people as possible!
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Thank you so much for visiting and for the wonderful post! Please do leave the links here, so people can follow them to the rest of your posts. I’ll also add them to the main post.
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What a great article. As a horse lover/owner/rider I’m constantly annoyed by some of the inconsistencies you mention – especially the one about stallions. I have to grit my teeth when I read about the heroine dashing about in a huge stallion – especially as in a book I read recently, when she also wraps the reins around her hands! I usually manage to include a horse in most of my own writing (Science Fiction and Fantasy) and used Fjords for the riders on the cold, icy planet in my SF series. (I was glad to see you agree with my choice, in your post.) Thanks for such an interesting and imformative post.
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Oops, that should hae been informative! 😦
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Yay! Thank you so much, Hywela 😀
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I’m obviously having a bad spelling day! 🙂
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If you are going to have your characters ride geldings, PLEASE do consider how they got that way! They are not born without balls!
Gelding a horse without anesthesia and antibiotics is no easy matter. In fact, it is on the books as horse abuse in some countries. And I know from first hand experience that being thrown down, immobilized and having their testicles chopped out can permanently sour a horse on interacting with humans.
Emasculating meat animals like cows and goats by tying off the blood supply to their testicles when they are only a few days old is a low tech solution. But, while it makes for good eating, it does not necessarily make for good riding.
Stallions were preferred cavalry mounts for millennia, and they have sufficient strength in their forequarters to hold up to serious work under saddle. They are also well suited to working with other stallions. Bachelor bands and lieutenant stallions are common in the wild.
Historically the best horse breeders kept their mares far from their rivals. Mares were also usually pregnant or tending to their foals.
The exception would be a last ditch defense of turning loose a mare in heat in order to throw a battle field of warriors mounted on stallions into chaos.
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Wow, thank you so much for the info! I literally cringe at the thought of gelding a horse with no anesthesia.
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